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Uuuhuu Girl...
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Uuuhuu Girl... |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Been dreaming about you all the time You’re so lovely in the night. Got my knees aging uh it’s true Can’t help it there’s something about you That makes me lose track of time You really blow my mind. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Can’t control my heart any more Cause your prettier than before. And every time you look at me. Can’t help it you’ve got something extreme That makes me lose track of time You really blow my mind. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. I’d like to take a sip, of your lovely lips. I can see you smile, lights up your eyes. You make me lose track of time You really blow my mind. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. Uuuhuu girl there is something you should know. I’m in love with you. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hmm...could this be a song?  Pretty good...expressive...basic... I wish I could write a song. Be kind, be true, be bold, be you. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Nice Song.  I hope you told the girl how ya felt. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. I think these are the keys to hit songs.....little catch phrases. Uuhuuu is a sound that is catchy and i liked it. Nicely done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I too am guessing this is a song. It is very nice. I think whoever you wrote this for would like it. *Amanda* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well done with the song. You did really good. Thanks for sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
your songs are always nice to read...i enjoyed thisone as well...great job! im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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