Maybe She'd Still Love You (Adaption of Tonic's "If You Could Only See")

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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2002-01-16 11:01 AM

If you could only hear the words
She’s screaming,
Maybe she wouldn’t run,
Run so far, so far away,
From you,
To only be free

If you could only see the scars,
She’s placed
Upon
Herself,
Maybe she’d still love you

Well you went your way,
And she went hers,
You left her behind,
Now her world blurs,
Well you said you loved her,
But you don’t…oh no…

If you could only hear the words
She’s screaming,
Maybe she wouldn’t run,
Run so far, so far away,
From you,
To only be free

If you could only see the scars,
She’s placed
Upon
Herself,
Maybe she’d still love you

She only wanted you to help,
But you walked away from her,
You couldn’t hear her screaming,
For the one that she loved,
(She did what she knew)
You said you loved her,
But you don’t…oh no…
(You’re always wanting what you can’t have)
She don’t know where you stand,
She’s doing all she can

If you could only hear the words
She’s screaming,
Maybe she wouldn’t run,
Run so far, so far away,
From you,
To only be free

If you could only see the scars,
She’s placed
Upon
Herself,
Maybe she’d still love you

**instrumental interlude**

You said you loved her,
But you don’t…oh no…
(…oh no…)
She don’t know where you stand,
She’s doing all she can

If you could only hear the words
She’s screaming,
Maybe she wouldn’t run,
Run so far, so far away,
From you,
To only be free

If you could only see
The scars
She’s placed
Upon herself
Maybe she’d still love you.

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I'm sick with some stomach virus, so I decided to write, and this was the MP3 I was playing...I listening to the track a few times, then came up with this to go to the tune of it.

-Adam

"I like pigs. Dogs look up at us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals." - Winston Churchill

[This message has been edited by Kosetsu (01-16-2002 11:07 AM).]

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

1 posted 2002-01-16 01:36 PM

Very creative! I love Tonic and this is a great adaption!! Hope your get rid of the stomach virus! Those are icky!
*Pixie*

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

2 posted 2002-01-16 05:05 PM

I really liked this one!! I like that song alot and I thought this was very good. Thanks for sharing and I hope you feel better soon
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2002-01-17 10:06 AM

"If you could only see the scars,
She’s placed
Upon
Herself,
Maybe she’d still love you"

I really liked this. It was confusing in parts, but I would be interested in hearing the music to it.

Well done.

--Marie

I wish you fingers could touch all I can't say... no should ever feel this alone.

[This message has been edited by Fading Away (01-17-2002 10:07 AM).]

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

4 posted 2002-01-17 11:53 AM

Ah... too bad I can't hear the song...

But the words you added to it are really sad, so I guess it carried a sad tune...

Anywayz, hang in there, and get well soon!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2002-01-17 06:12 PM

Everytime I heard that song today my mind went back to this poem..so heheh yes now I'm replying really couldn't yesterday..I like it

and err your sick too? maybe its a conspiracy? lol..hope you feel better..*hugs*

Kris

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

6 posted 2002-01-17 09:05 PM

Actually the song doesn't have a sad mood to it...the tune is a little sad, but it's the new lyrics I made for it that gives it the sadness. I'm glad you people liked it.

And I think it is a conspiracy. Either that, or terrorists...they've resorted to stomach flus O_O

-Adam

"I like pigs. Dogs look up at us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals." - Winston Churchill

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