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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
I try and I try, To help those who need it, But by and by, I get lost too! And when I do, I feel helpless and confused. My thoughts lost for a day of two, wondering, looking, searching... The answer I may or may not find. But I still try with, All my heart, To look for it in my mind. And if I do find it? What then? Is it to late? Must it be forgotten? So you see it may very well be, That every answer has a question. It has happened to you and me, Because that is what life is. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome 2 Passions!!! Great first post! I enjoyed it a lot and i know how you feel..i've feelin that way 2 before....welcome again and hope to read more from you in the near future! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!  great first post Please check your email for a special greeting! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!  It's nice to meet someone who does try to help others in need. And well, you sometimes might end up in various difficult positions yourself. Like whether helping the person is the right thing to do? Or you have too little time for yourself and your loved ones after you spend too much time helping this person.These might not be the problems you encounter, but when you do get lost, don't despair. You search for answers that you might not find, coz in life, there is no real differentiation of rights and wrongs. There are always shades of grey. Just do what you think is right  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Awsome first piece I can really relate to what you are saying.Keep up the awsome work I can't read more. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I knew there was a reason I like you! Welcome to Passions, dear, I'm glad that you've finally worked your way over here... I used to be open minded, but all my brains fell out |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Welcome!  If you're a friend of Sky's, you're a friend of mine.  Wonderful post. Reminds me a bit of my style. But, that's not why I enjoyed it, LMAO. Great work here, my friend. Sincerely, Titus I am me, living in my dreams. |
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nichole2005 Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 20 |
That is a terrific post thanx for sharing!May the light always shine for you when you write!  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Wonderful first post... good way to start things off here in PIP. I enjoyed the read... you know, trying is a good thing. At least you're putting effort out there... which is more than most would do in this situaion. Well done. I enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading more --Marie 'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.' |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
Thank you all for the welcome!  It has been a booster for me!  When I get more peoms out of my head I will all let you! Let the good times roll!!  Love the Rubberband  |
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