Teen Poetry #5 |
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Pain |
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dawn New Member
since 2002-01-03
Posts 2 |
My hearts in 2 Now I dont know what to do I wish you could heal it back But you cant do that You weren't supposed to hurt me So now I weap on my knees I cried myself to sleep last night Knowing this was the start of another fight A fight that might not go by that fast At the end of this fight I know I'll be in last My feelings have all gone away So now I wont have to feel all this pain |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Lover's fight... ![]() However, if you think your relationship is going to be over soon. It will be likely to hurt even more. Something that I hope you could get over soon, coz if it was not meant to be, it wasn't. Then you would eventually meet someone who is. ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
I've been there before. As for the poem itself, it's good. Simple, but sometimes simple poems are the best. -Adam "I like pigs. Dogs look up at us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals." - Winston Churchill |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Fighting's not fun... it's painful, I agree with you there. But just think about the making up ![]() I enjoyed this, and I'm sorry that you're having a rough time with the relationship. But if this happens often, maybe it's not meant to be. A relationship should cause more happiness than pain. *hugs* ![]() --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no should ever feel this alone. |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
=( I hate fights...theyre horrible...but sometimes ppl are closer after it...and the makeup parts always fun =) I hope things turn out ok. Nice poem A life without loveā¦is no life at all. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
In words short and few...FIGHTS SUCK! But fighting is healthy as long as its not a 24/7 kind of thing because if you didnt fight then you guys would be absolutely weirdo's and out of the norm! You fight because you love eachother and care...just remember that when things start to get shaky...you wouldnt fight with eachother if you didnt care yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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