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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
The Perfect World I dream of a perfect world. A world where everyone is happy A world full of love and understanding I dream of a perfect world with lots of nature A world where people are not cruel A world with no problems But as i look deeper into the matter, I realize that ^that perfect world would be boring. That we already live in a perfect world. Even with all of its problems and pains, We have love and pleasure and friendship everywhere. With that said, i realize that it is the problems and challenges that this world presents, that makes life interesting and worth living. So really, looking at it from that view, dont you too, think this is a perfect world? When things seem hopeless we should not give up, but keep trying to find the answer to the problem.Every problem has a solution and sometimes its right under your very own nose. A life without love…is no life at all. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 I like this very much, and I agree with you!  [This message has been edited by SEA (01-14-2002 10:44 AM).] |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
I'm sorry I don't agree with you...but this was a good piece none the less The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Very interesting and i think ur right..if everything were to be perfect it wouldnt be appreciated..i dunno about boring but definately not appreciated..nice read! Thanks for sharing! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yes, in fact, sometimes it's the problem and pains in life that brings people closer together, as they are tests as to how strong relationships are. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Beautiful ideas you have here... This poem reminded me of a Christian camp I went to... we were asked to think of what we would do to make the world perfect if we were to create it again. Thanks for the trip down memory lane I really enjoyed this. I hope to see more soon.--Marie 'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.' |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is so right because without all the problems and challenges life would be really boering.But anyway I really like this piece it has an interesting perspective.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
I don't think there's anything here that needs to be changed, it's a great poem based on your feelings and beliefs. I think it's always great to read about how others feel/think about certain situations... so keep up the good work! "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I totally agree with you how are we suppose to know happiness without knowing pain you've brought up an excellent point thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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