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LCsftball16 Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 39 |
just be free let go of the image of a perfect guy don't worry about physical oppositions just feel the emotion hesitation is no option just react and go with the heat of the moment for a moment only lasts forever within an innocent mind |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Wow! Not only did I agree with the poem---but I really enjoyed the last stanza. It has that optimistic point of view to that! Very cute and clever! I've learned that the girl (or boy...depends on the gender) may not be THE ONE for you. Good write! I'll be sure to be on the lookout for more of your work! The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awesome poem!!!!!! This is exactly the kind of thing i wanna tell my friends when they're dealing with relationships and crushes and stuff...nicely done! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Yeah I tell my friends this all the time but they are all full of themselves and are all about looks so it really doesn't matter.But anyway awsome poem I really like it. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is so true.... In fact, we have a Chinese saying: It doesn't matter that it doesn't last forever, coz you've once held it close to your heart before. Or we could say, rather to love and lost, than to never love at all.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
aargh... image of perfection certainly sucks. What is perfect anyway? This is a well-written poem dealing with that heavy question. I enjoyed it (and if you ever find the answer to that question... be sure to email me.)--Marie 'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.' |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Ohhhh I liked this one ALOT. I have to agree with Marie...If you EVER find the answer to this....please let me know! Thanks for sharing..I enjoyed... ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
You certainly sound uncertain LOL But aren't we always uncertain about stuff like this? Great read! "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I've been reading poems with such truths to it lately this is one of em short but has a lot of meaning thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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