Title: I’m Trying I’m Wanting

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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-01-13 08:52 PM

January 13, 2002, 5:34 PM

I’m trying to be a
Very good friend
I’m trying to be there
When ever I can
I’m wanting give my
Love as much as
People want it.
I’m trying hard to
Listen, to talk to comfort
To care
I’m wanting to understand
Why life is not fair?
I’m trying my hardest
To make people smile
I’m wanting lend a helping hand.
I’m trying to be all I can be
I’m wanting to wipe those
Tears that you cry
I’m trying to those who need
A hug.
I’m wanting to feel the pain
In my heart.
I’m trying to be happy
In life
I’m wanting to make memories
That’ll last till I die
I’m trying to be a good sister
And do all I can.
I’m wanting to be honest
I’m trying give trust
I’m wanting to not hurt
My self as much
I’m trying to keep my feelings
Deep in side.
I’m wanting hard not to shout
Out the words that hurt so much
I’m trying to make this poem
Sound right
I’m wanting to make my
Dreams come true
I’m trying to make u love me
Like I love u.
I’m wanting to give the
Moon and the stars
I’ trying to swim out
Really far
I’m wanting to see
What’s at the end of the
Rainbow.
I’m trying to stay warm
When nights get cold
I’m wanting someone
To keep my secrets
I’m trying my best to
Stay in one piece.
I’m wanting the sky
To always stay blue
I’m trying imagine what it would
Be like to have wings
Like an angel and fly
I’m wanting to swim
Like a fish in the sea
I’m trying to say my prays
At night
I’m wanting to be a
Child again to make it
Fun
I’m trying I’m wanting
For things to go right.

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2002-01-13 09:39 PM

Wow i really liked this it was kind along
but it was very well written...
Its goin in my library

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TigerZ
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-01-13 09:48 PM

Very nice poem. I loved it =)

A life without love…is no life at all.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2002-01-13 09:53 PM

Wow....This is an awsome piece I really love it.But anyway I can't wait to read more keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
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4 posted 2002-01-13 10:21 PM

Great job in expressing your feelings and emotions here. Well writtn and looking forward to reading more from u

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Melster
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

5 posted 2002-01-13 10:39 PM

Great work, remember to be who you are and never lose that, try to be the best friend you can and if that's not good enough then their friendship isn't worth having no matter how much of a friend you are, they will never be one back!! You are who you are and God and we all here love you for that!!!

Great Work!!

MelZ!!!

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

6 posted 2002-01-13 11:39 PM

I am glad i took you up on the idea and read
this i reallu enjoyed it. It is like my life
in poem form!
Not to mention MN is a pretty great state.
(i know that has nothing to do with the
poem but i just read where you were from
and had to comment!)
Great work
to the library it goes!

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Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

7 posted 2002-01-14 12:05 PM

Hehe. This seems like a mission statement to me.

I did one a few months back, and this is really good!

I hope you can fulfil everything you want and try to do, but do not give up if you don't. There are too many things happening around us, and we can never please everyone. So just make yourself happy by doing what you think is right.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

8 posted 2002-01-14 06:04 PM

I know how you feel. All you gotta do is keep tryin, it will work out sooner or latter. I love this poem. And it does sound right.

---Night Angel

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2002-01-16 09:44 PM

and trying is the most that you can do. So keep it up. It'll come to some good.

Hang in there *hugs*.

--Marie

'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.'

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