Teen Poetry #5 |
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all hell is breaking loose.. |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
it hurts... that your not even trying to at least be there when i need you to yousay you love me i see it in your eyes i believe you but sometimes you dont try you leave when it gets bad you pick the worst times to go and when i need you most ur never really there i know were far apart but you could still wait for me wheni say ill be back i mean it cant you see? im not one to lie i tell you everything with honesty so when i said id be back you leave anyway it hurts so bad right now you left and it might be the last time we speak for all hell is breaking loose and me and you, might be through (and i cant believe you left..if only you knew...) i love you very much you love me too, i know but they dont and they have control and theres nothin to do ....hey wheres the cream filling?!... |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
it's hard to love someoen when distance comes in the way. i can reall feel how much you care for this person. and i insure you, if it was meant to be, it will be. good write and good luck. -ab "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*hugs Alyssa* Guys suck, hon. ![]() I used to be open minded, but all my brains fell out |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
aww hun i understand ya i've had the same situation before...::hugs:: hope all gets better yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
*sigh* I guess it takes alot for a guy to finally learn to be sensitive and stick around when you need him. But don't worry, I hope everything works out for you soon! ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
It's tough to love someone. Distance makes it more difficult, even if it's only short. I hope everything works out sis. Great write. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Distance in a relationship makes things a lot tougher so I hope things gets better for you.Beautiful poem and I can't wait to read more. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
well aint that just amazin i get 6 replies when i write a poem off the top of my head but when i take time to write one i get like 4 replies lol thanks guys distance sucks arse but everything is bakc on track for now ....hey wheres the cream filling?!... |
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Alexia![]()
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
Hey homey G, I know you and josh have "your times" but you know he'll never stop loving you! =P You have a great boyfriend. Hope everything turns out for yuh! lylas, Megz ¤1 tequlia, 2 tequlia, 3 tequlia, |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just hang in there Alyssa If you have sour feelings, talk to him about it communication helps a lot thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Love hurts... but to avoid repeating everything acire said, listen to him. He knows what he's talking about ![]() --Marie 'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.' |
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