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TigerZ
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0 posted 2002-01-13 12:22 PM


Everyday

I think about you everyday…
every second, minute and hour…
but I miss you…
most of all, at the early hours of the night…
when you are in my dreams…
kissing…
holding and touching me…
just to wake up to reality to find…
that you are not there…
that you never were…
that I have to live another day…
without you here by my side.



© Copyright 2002 Leandie Erasmus - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-13 12:56 PM



Is, in long WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!

I enjoyed ur first post a lot and i hope you enjoy it here and continue to keep posting! It's good to write down ur feelings..it helps clarify them sometimes   Welcome again and keep on postin!


yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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Welcome, and wow....this is so touching.....pulling on my heart strings already! I see I will have to watch out for yours and have tissues handy Please check your email for a special greeting!

with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......

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3 posted 2002-01-13 05:03 AM


Welcome to passions!!!

I really like this poem!!! Its the way that I am kinda feeling...Im really glad that you shared it with us and I hope to see alot more of your work!!!


If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

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4 posted 2002-01-13 12:26 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

This poem is so sad!!! I don't know if this is a case of an ended relationship, or a secret admiration. Whichever it might be, it's equally bad, and I hope you'll soon meet someone who'll make you happy.

I look forward to seeing more of your poems. Pour your feelings out, and share it with us.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 2002-01-13 05:24 PM


Awsome first piece I really like it.But anyway I can't wait to read more and keep up the awsome work.And I hope things get better for you this is a really sad piece.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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6 posted 2002-01-14 05:01 PM


WELCOME!!! WELCOME!!! WELCOME!!!

I loved it! What a wonderful first post. I enjoyed it mucho. It flowed well, and kept me reading. Keep it up new friend!

Sincerely,
Titus

I am me, living in my dreams.

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7 posted 2002-01-16 07:58 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY

I really enjoyed this... a wonderful first post!  Lots of feeling and emotion.. lots of nostalgia.
Wonderful work... hope to see more soon But don't forget to reply to other's works also.  Let them know what you think about their writing... it's a two-way street

Again, welcome!  And well done!

--Marie

'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.'

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