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Reflections Within A Tear |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
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“Reflections Within A Tear” The darkness settles in As I sit beneath the sky Upon a stony path spiraling down As it juts in to my spine Laughter is heard I open my eyes remembering That I am at a party With many people Yet I am alone none the less The fire burns high I reminisce, thinking back To you And how much like that fire I was And am Soaring up to the heavens Proclaiming all glory For life had truly begun In your arms But as the fire I did perish The fire drowned out with no air And I with out your love Gazing up at the sky I search for the stars So that I may wish But alas None seek to find me Nor my heart worthy of any wishes So search my heart and pray That we shall be reunited again One day Anger at myself For holding on so long As the pain builds up Threatening to destroy me I walk To clear my mind And set myself strait My problem lie not with holding on But in fear of letting go For then I will have nothing But a faded memory of the one I love But force myself Against my heart To forget But it shall not happen You will be in my heart forever I will not let go Nor take any other You are my love Whether or not you are with me Joyous faces and happy smiles Despite my somber façade I want to cry But I will hold it back Show myself strong Though to look in to my eyes Within their bluish hue One can see the tears I hold on to for you Daylight comes To find me stiff and sore Isolation sent me to my place Upon the rising stairs Far from those who want me close For all I can do is dream of you Within waking life and slumber I find it never ending This winding path Of sorrowful joy Grinning weakly I close my eyes for a moment Seeing us as we once were And a single tear Falls down my cheek Within it reflecting A thousand memories Never to be forgotten Nor to fade with time Because even though The stars do hide As the shadows play Upon the midnight sky As I find myself lost Within feelings of confusion, Anger, and despair Reflected within That single tear Showing me without thought How much I love you It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
You are on a roll today! This was also a wonderful poem. The title really caught my eye, and I am glad, b/c I would have missed a beautiful poem. Great job! *Amanda* |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This was beautiful...you spill out your emotions so purely and honestly... "keep them coming"... I hate saying that because it's such a common thing to say but I mean it.  Be kind, be true, be bold, be you. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
 Wow Lonewolf.....  |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Thank you for you replies It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Very good! I don't know what to say.. this left me speechless..  I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here Lonewolf.....you ARE on a roll. hehe......I liked this one a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Thank you for the replies It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I really like this poem...maybe you should show it to her? just a little advice I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow..once again...oh darn im loving your pieces..right now...hehe...amazing and the discriptions were pure beauty...i can relate ...awesome job.im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Your latest pieces have been absolutely awesome. I loved this, LW! Awesome work. Just awesome --Marie |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
The fire burns high I reminisce, thinking back To you And how much like that fire I was And am wow this is a great read indeed!!!!..thanks for sharing lone wolf!!..hope to read more |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Thanks all of you for your replies. and stace, i was actually thinking about showing her more of my poems, but i'll tell you about that when i see you online. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooo...this one rocks! You should seriously consider showing her some of these. They are great! "As I find myself lost Within feelings of confusion, Anger, and despair Reflected within That single tear Showing me without thought How much I love you" That's just amazing. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me... |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
"This winding path Of sorrowful joy" i love that.and this poem was filled with intense honest emotions of fear of lovelost but hopes of it comin back.wow u're a big inspiration. Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved. |
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