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I'm a criminal
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I'm a criminal |
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Yezea, your Angel Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 11Canada |
To this guy, who once really cared about me The one I prefered to ignore To this guy that called me last night And knew how make laugh my sad heart ---------------------------------------------------- I'm a criminal I admit, Yes I admit About that, I wouldnt be able to lie Crime against heart, I did If think of someone else Is a crime, Im guilty To think about you If care about someone else Is a crime,Im guilty To careabout you My mind cannot keep the control My heart is just a bit crazy But to fight against myself, Im too lazy Lets my feelings go away Keep them if they are in your good way You know that it will be only for somes days anyway If it was a crime to tell you Forgive me to be your sweet criminal **************************************************** For those day which we need too much love.. for those day which everything seems wrong. It was only one of those day, he was in my way to recomfort me. No more no less.. Only somes words to express |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Interesting poem I really liked it keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I liked this a lot!!! Thanks for sharing  Look forward to reading more yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hmmm...interesting form. I enjoyed this one very much---again, it's interesting. The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!! |
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