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gymnast
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since 2001-11-18
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Scotland.

0 posted 2002-01-06 12:21 PM


Before reading this I want you to be able to understand it.  It's for my neice and nephew who I won't see anymore because their parents split up.  This is for Jamie-June and Alex.
I miss you both!

You’re both so young
Innocent and carefree
I loved when I saw you
And I hope you love me.
We used to have fun
Just messing around
I loved looking after you
I never ever frowned
You’re both still you
Whole lives to lead
You’re not grown up yet
Not even old enough to read
This is for the memories
Good and Bad
Now you’re not here to share them
It makes me feel so sad
I miss you both so much
It’s killing me inside
Knowing I’ll never be there
Going along for the ride
I won’t ever be there
To watch you grow up
To help with your problems
Or to cheer you up
What we had is gone
And you might not remember me
Because you’re still so young, but
There’s a place in my heart where you’ll be
Why did they break up?
It was for the best
But now I’ve lost you
I don’t care ‘bout the rest
Towards the end
I knew we were on borrowed time
I didn’t think it was so short
I thought you’d still be mine
Everytime we said Goodbye
I knew it could be the last
And then it was,
How the time had flew past
I still love you both
You’re always in my heart
And I’m never letting you go
You belong in my heart
The only thing I wish
Is that things hadn’t changed
That it was all the same
But still it changed
And I’m left with the pain
I love you both
No matter what you do
I love you forever
And hope you love me too.
I miss you will all my heart
I’d give anything to change it
To go back to the start
How I miss you both!

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1 posted 2002-01-07 01:41 AM


This was so beautiful hun! Im shur that they know that you love them with all your heart and im shur they miss you just as much as you miss them!! Very sweet!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
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British Columbia, Canada
2 posted 2002-01-07 05:33 PM


Awww... *sniff* I think you should keep a copy of that and give it to them when they're older and they can understand how truly special they are to you. Great read!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05
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east haddam (moodus) ct :)
3 posted 2002-01-07 08:16 PM


awww,,, thats incredebly sad...hopefully u can find some way around it, like before you know it, theyll be able to read, maybe you can write to them or something...best wishes
TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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4 posted 2002-01-08 01:28 AM


Very sad but also beautiful at the same time.But I loved this piece and I can't wait to read more.And I know they noth know how much you truely miss them.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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