Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Miss You Both |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
Before reading this I want you to be able to understand it. It's for my neice and nephew who I won't see anymore because their parents split up. This is for Jamie-June and Alex. I miss you both! You’re both so young Innocent and carefree I loved when I saw you And I hope you love me. We used to have fun Just messing around I loved looking after you I never ever frowned You’re both still you Whole lives to lead You’re not grown up yet Not even old enough to read This is for the memories Good and Bad Now you’re not here to share them It makes me feel so sad I miss you both so much It’s killing me inside Knowing I’ll never be there Going along for the ride I won’t ever be there To watch you grow up To help with your problems Or to cheer you up What we had is gone And you might not remember me Because you’re still so young, but There’s a place in my heart where you’ll be Why did they break up? It was for the best But now I’ve lost you I don’t care ‘bout the rest Towards the end I knew we were on borrowed time I didn’t think it was so short I thought you’d still be mine Everytime we said Goodbye I knew it could be the last And then it was, How the time had flew past I still love you both You’re always in my heart And I’m never letting you go You belong in my heart The only thing I wish Is that things hadn’t changed That it was all the same But still it changed And I’m left with the pain I love you both No matter what you do I love you forever And hope you love me too. I miss you will all my heart I’d give anything to change it To go back to the start How I miss you both! |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so beautiful hun! Im shur that they know that you love them with all your heart and im shur they miss you just as much as you miss them!! Very sweet!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Awww... *sniff* I think you should keep a copy of that and give it to them when they're older and they can understand how truly special they are to you. Great read! ![]() "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
awww,,, thats incredebly sad...hopefully u can find some way around it, like before you know it, theyll be able to read, maybe you can write to them or something...best wishes ![]() |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad but also beautiful at the same time.But I loved this piece and I can't wait to read more.And I know they noth know how much you truely miss them. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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