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I Cried
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Thurs,1/3/02 Started poem 10:10 a.m. Title: I Cried I cried because How you make me feel. I cried because You think i'm lazy. I cried because I dont love you I dont care for you I dont need you Here. I cried because How you make me Depressed and hate myself Much more. I cried because The thoughts i have Of you are sad and You hate me. I cried because How badly you Tear my heart apart. I cried because No matter what Will never be close. I cried because Joy and happiness Is gone six feet under. I cried because I dont wonna be Your daughter. I cried because All i want is out From your hell hole. I cried because I cant understand Why you make Me sad. I cried because My soul is damaged From you pain and strife. Ended10:19 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, this is so sad......you are on the right track though, write your feelings out, and I like that you put the time  I do that too, only I just write the time I finished mine....I don't post that part LOL, but you can bet it's on every single poem I have I hope you keep sharing.... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh wow, this is sad. I'm so sorry that you ever had to endure this. No one deserves it. I hope you know that. I did enjoy this. You wrote about it nicely. I look forward to more. --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I do not know if these tears are in your mind or on your floor...either way I apologize that life holds these sharp pains for all of us, but I remind you that they are here for all of us, your are not alone in your pain. I am though happy to see you have used your emotions as base for this wonderful work of poetry. "It is better to have loved and lost than to have never have loved at all" ...but the pain of both is equally unbearable... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I could say "wow, that was sad", but you already knew that.  So... onto new business... you're experiencing something chaotic and beautiful here... life! Just don't let it become your noose, alright? We're not playing hangman here. Live and learn. You'll be alright... just hang in there. My sympthy and strength goes to you. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It was lovely. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
hun this was so sad!!!! ::HUGS:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad poem I hope things get better for you. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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