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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-05 04:21 PM


As a little girl,
I looked up to you
We always saw eye to eye on everything
There was never a dull moment between us.
I would start a sentence,
And we would finish it together in the same words
We would never be seen apart
Always together
Where ever you went
I went
Following right beside you,
Like a little shadow.
As I got older I became a pest
But you didn’t care
Why would you?
You’re my dad
Where ever I went,
You where right behind me
To catch me if I fell
And you would always tell me to try again
And never give up
So with you around I believed I could do anything
I still do
I am a younger version of you
Who looks exactly like you
When you where my age.
Everyone tells us we look so a like
I have your looks, your personality
Everything you have,
I have from genies
Except the fact that I am a girl,
A daddy’s girl
If we where ever apart
A piece of the puzzle was missing
So until we where together again
The puzzle wasn’t complete
I am proud to be a daddy’s girl,
And that’s what I will always be
No matter how old I will get
I will be a daddy’s girl,
Now and forever

"Water Over Matter"

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Ann - All Rights Reserved
LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10
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1 posted 2002-01-05 06:26 PM


This very good, i liked it. nice job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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2 posted 2002-01-05 07:12 PM


Awwww how cute!! I use to be a daddy's girl myself Now since im a teen i guess i dont allow myself to be anymore..but i do remember those times Thanks for the flashback

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
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3 posted 2002-01-05 08:41 PM


Good poem, it touched my heart.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05
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4 posted 2002-01-05 08:59 PM


wow, i wish i still had that with my dad...i liked this tho...shows family value
       ~Kimmie

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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5 posted 2002-01-08 01:44 AM


Very nice I don't get along with my mom at all so I've always been closer to my dad.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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