Teen Poetry #5 |
Daddys Girl |
Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
As a little girl, I looked up to you We always saw eye to eye on everything There was never a dull moment between us. I would start a sentence, And we would finish it together in the same words We would never be seen apart Always together Where ever you went I went Following right beside you, Like a little shadow. As I got older I became a pest But you didn’t care Why would you? You’re my dad Where ever I went, You where right behind me To catch me if I fell And you would always tell me to try again And never give up So with you around I believed I could do anything I still do I am a younger version of you Who looks exactly like you When you where my age. Everyone tells us we look so a like I have your looks, your personality Everything you have, I have from genies Except the fact that I am a girl, A daddy’s girl If we where ever apart A piece of the puzzle was missing So until we where together again The puzzle wasn’t complete I am proud to be a daddy’s girl, And that’s what I will always be No matter how old I will get I will be a daddy’s girl, Now and forever "Water Over Matter" |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
This very good, i liked it. nice job. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awwww how cute!! I use to be a daddy's girl myself Now since im a teen i guess i dont allow myself to be anymore..but i do remember those times Thanks for the flashback ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Good poem, it touched my heart. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow, i wish i still had that with my dad...i liked this tho...shows family value ~Kimmie |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very nice I don't get along with my mom at all so I've always been closer to my dad. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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