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lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

0 posted 2002-01-05 08:57 PM

My story as told by a lonely girl
empty words with no meaning
the words shes been seen screaming
Meaning nothing too much

The sounds flow through her misunderstood lips
Empty words with no meaning
The words that shes been screaming
Just a little too much

As she screams :

“ the world is too small and the water feels just right ”
“ the world is too small it’s the wrong time to fight ”

my saga as cried by the scary girl
her frozen tears are streaming
screaming words with no meaning
meaning nothing too much

her eyes say it all
her frozen tears be streaming
screaming words with no meaning
just a little too much.

And as she screams:

“ The walls are too close and the ceiling too low ”
“ I feel claustrophobic and times moving too slow ”

my odyssey as told by a dramatic girl
who believe her words have meaning
all those vacant words she be screaming
that mean the world to her

meaning more then you know
as her lips keep on moving
her thoughts become more disturbing
but only to her

as she whispers:

“ im enclosed with this invisible wall ”
“ im standing on the edge and im about to fall ”

IM LOOSING CONTROL!

~Kimmie!

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2002-01-06 04:54 PM

so very sad,i hope you are alright.
your poem was very good, keep writing.

Regina

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-01-06 10:32 PM

I like this Kimmie! It flows like a sad song.
I hope all is well, if ever you need to talk , im an e mail away.

RP

prov1717
Member

since 2001-12-26

Posts 74
NE

3 posted 2002-01-06 10:51 PM

“ the world is too small and the water feels just right ”
“ the world is too small it’s the wrong time to fight ”
you showed so much emotion in this poem, i know everyone says this but...i really hear ya. keep it up.

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2002-01-07 09:38 AM

kimmie:
hun u have such amazing talent!! ur definetly gonna go somewhere w/ all that. im sorry everything is like it is for you rite now but try and think positive ok? i love you and these are some great lyrics!!
~britt~

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-01-07 05:31 PM

"meaning nothing too much" <- great line! This was a great poem! I could actually hear someone screaming while I was reading this. Keep up the good work.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

6 posted 2002-01-07 07:55 PM

guys!!! thanx a bunch, i appriciate it! i havent had much time to reply to poems, but im gonna right now..aight? lotsa love!!
~Kimmie

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2002-01-07 08:55 PM

I liked this a lot..very creative piece. I enjoyed it a lot thanks for sharing hun

Keep em coming!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

8 posted 2002-01-08 01:49 AM

Wow.. I hope everything is ok with you and this is a very creative piece I love it.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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