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Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

0 posted 2002-01-04 08:57 PM

Before I met you,
I was a sad, and lonely young man.
I had moved here not knowing anyone.
Then the next year,
I began to know you better.
It was then that I became interested in you.

It took me the whole year,
To get up enough courage to ask you out.
But, as luck would have it,
You were taken.
It took me almost another,
Before I could ask again.
Then you were taken.
I thought that I had lost every chance
at getting you.

I thought I had lost you forever.
Then, a few months back,
I had gotten another chance.
I didn't wait this time.
(I would not allow myself,
To make the same mistake again)
I jumped at the chance.
Wondering all the time,
What would happen ,
If you were to say no.
Wondering what I would do,
If you were to say no.
As you or anyone can see,
I did not let that thought
Stand in my way.
As you or anyone can see,
I did not let anything else
Stand in my way.

I was on a mission.
A mission to get you,
and keep you,
Forever.
And from this mission,
I emerged victorious.
I had completed my mission
and had won my prize.
Your Love for me.

Everyday since,
Our love has done nothing,
But grow.
Everyday I have done nothing but grow Fonder of you
And cannot see my life,
Without you.
I cannot imagine living
Without you.

Over the past months,
You have become very precious to me
and the more I think of it,
The more I feel you complete me,
The more I feel you make my life
Worth Living.

You have brightened up my life,
To a point where I am almost blinded
By your love.
To a point where you are ALWAYS
In my thoughts and Dreams.

So Please Heather,
Know that I will,
And Always will,
Love you and hold you in my heart,
For the rest of my life.

Lil_Angel123
Junior Member

since 2001-12-16

Posts 13

1 posted 2002-01-04 09:18 PM

Hey hun,
I really like that poem alot. it has emotions and feelings combined to show your feelings about Heather. The love of youre life. I like that poem alot. you should write more!
~Amanda~

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-01-04 09:33 PM

It's wonderful to read poems about people who just have that much power over us. Perfect words to describe a growing love... keep writing.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

3 posted 2002-01-05 12:05 PM

Hey hun!
Love your peom! You told me how you felt but, you never mentioned this. Thats ok though, I'm just glad to know, that I mean that much to you. You mean the world to me, with out you I would be lost. I love you and always will no matter what happens!

~Your Baby Angel~

[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (01-05-2002 05:00 PM).]

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-05 10:34 PM

Awww... this is so sweet!
It's wonderful when you have the special someone, huh?

I enjoyed this, and look forward to reading more.

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

5 posted 2002-01-06 04:35 PM

This poem is really sweet-it's nice to see people show such emotions for another! Hope you and Heather are very happy together! And keep up the good work with your poems!!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-01-06 10:38 PM

awww such heartfelt emotions throughout this poem. It is really good and I wish only the best for you and your girl.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2002-01-07 09:01 PM

Beautiful poem!!!! Very sweet and im so glad that you got the girl in the end and your happy

You should give this to her. She would love it

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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