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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-12-05 08:36 PM

A kiss from you,
it makes my heart melt.
What i'm feeling right now,
is something I've never felt.

Our hearts full of passion,
as my tongue tastes your lips.
This was what I was looking for,
this wonderful, real bliss.

I don't know what to say,
and nothing seems amiss.
And all my heart could say,
was said in one simple kiss.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 12-06-2001).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-12-05 08:38 PM

awwwwwwwwwwwww! you should hear me squealing my head off here girly....too bad there isnt a decent guy in sight....*sigh*..cute poem...i liked this one loads!..

i luve mi con-tray! lyke a big an brown stetch olan wiv losa sun!

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

2 posted 2001-12-05 08:41 PM

hehe... nice write

I agree with the poem...in fact... excellent write! I really agree with the poem!

Not a decent guy in sight..? hm.. thats a shame... my text is in sight.. do i get a bonus =P
Once more, very nice write.

-Dreys

~gretchenp34~
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 46
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2001-12-06 03:22 PM

AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THATS SOOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"I cant sleep because i cant lay on my back cause there's a knife for everyday that i have known u." -Marilyn Manson

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2001-12-06 08:09 PM

I normally don't like reading love poems because most people don't write them well (including me). However, I think that this was very sweet and pure.... and how could I not appreciate that?

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 12-06-2001).]

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2001-12-06 08:40 PM

Very sweet your lucky to have someone you can feel that way about.But anyway I liked this one and keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

rolly_polly
Junior Member

since 2001-10-10

Posts 41
puerto rico

6 posted 2001-12-06 09:27 PM

AW! this was soo sweeet

...like it loads..keep it up!

~parallel universe~

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-12-07 12:18 PM

Very nice.

Heartfelt pieces are always good.
Keep posting these.
Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-12-21 05:03 PM

good for you
I love seeing poems showing contentment
*squeeze*

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

9 posted 2001-12-21 05:18 PM

That was sweet. Short, but it kept it going through the end. Nice write...

Titus

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

10 posted 2001-12-22 08:00 PM

Oooooh how romantical!!! Sometimes what you do with ur lips is the best kinda communication (and I dont mean talking) I liked this!!

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

11 posted 2001-12-23 12:34 PM

Awwww.

So cute...so sweet....*sniffff

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

12 posted 2002-01-04 06:31 PM

This poem is SO cute! I love it, it's BRILL! Only wish I had a guy to share it with! Anyway keep up the good work! I'd love to hear more!!!!!!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

13 posted 2002-01-05 10:22 PM

Aww!! This was so sweet... very honest, and true poem.
I enjoyed it bunches!
Post more soon

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

just_me
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 19

14 posted 2002-01-06 11:03 AM

I really like it! It totally sums everything up that I was thinking the other night when I was with a special someone... Awesome job!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

15 posted 2002-01-07 10:40 PM

Kisses can be so magical...sounds wonderful

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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