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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-04 11:20 AM

Day after day, I live my life
wondering when I will wake up and realize
that this is life
this is for real
this is not a childs game
it is the game of life
you can go down a one way street
and never come back
You can dig a hole for your life
and never get out
One mistake in the game of life and you may regret that choice for the rest of your life
That choice will always be with you
everytime you do something
You cannot choose death
it just happens
You can make it happen,
but always choose life
life may show you its bad side
but never let it pull you under
Remember this
Never let life take you down
no matter how bad life looks
It isnt as bad as your mind makes you think
when you take life seriously
you see it isnt as hard as you make it seem
do not let life defeat you
you defeat it.

"Water Over Matter"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-01-04 11:31 AM

Very inspiring poem...your right though, you shouldnt let life get ya down...stay strong! I enjoyed this a lot...gave me some hope

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2002-01-04 12:23 PM

Very optimistic poem, Lisa.

"you can go down a one way street
and never come back
You can dig a hole for your life
and never get out"

Those were by far my favorite lines. You speak so much truth in this poem, and you carry lots of positive thoughts to the reader. Very nice work! I really enjoyed this...

I look forward to reading more

--Marie

"It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2002-01-04 01:34 PM

It's nice to see some inspirational stuff on here!! This was very nice, and a big change from what I've read lately. I'm glad you decided to post this.

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

4 posted 2002-01-04 02:32 PM

This poem is BRILL! I love it! It really inspires you to keep on trying!Keep it up

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2002-01-04 10:11 PM

Very nice poem I really like it and I can't wait to read more.
Lauren

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