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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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(This one is for anybody who has lost a loved one.) Did it come so easily? Because you were all I have known.. Does your heart rest peacefully? Mines damaged, how to I dont know.. But I.... Well I know... I hated the day when you had to go, I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say, and I cant take that when you're taken away. but I feel you... ohh I feel you near me... I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say, and I cant take that when you're taken away. but I feel you... ohh I feel you near me... Did it come so painfully? A lovers dance we had sown.. Why must you leave so gracefully, I'm damaged, you're all that I've known. But I.. Well I know.... Goddamnit why did you have to go?!?!? I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say, and I CANT TAKE THAT WHEN YOU'RE TAKEN AWAY but I feel you.... ooh I feel you near me... We cannot go back. Can't go back. I cant go back. I must go on... I must go on...(why?) I didn't say all the things that I wanted to say. and I cant take that when you're taken away.. but I feel you.. ohh I feel you near me. Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I've heard this one before, sung by Plumb, actually...great song. *nods* I got the CD with it on it too! ^_^ YAY! Except there were small slight changes in this one...o_O; ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (01-03-2002 11:52 PM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yeah.. the cats out of the bag! (blushing) i love that song, dont you? yes i did change it around.. to something that would be meaningful, and doing so has brought me to closer meaning with what that song conveys so well |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
TRANCE NATION AMERICA V.2 12.PLUMMET DAMAGED this is what you're talking about, right? |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Uhm... No? ^^; Heh. I'm talking more like...no, wait. What am I talking about? o_O; I have "The best of Plumb track 9"...o_O; Like that means anything. Well, anyways...I hope all is well with you. ^^ Peace... ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (01-04-2002 12:24 AM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Hmm... looks like I stole this from somebody who stole it from somebody else!!, and besides, who ever said you could own words, sure, the publishers.. hey.. a good thing can have many faces... yea all is well with me thanks for hoping.. ummm.. what was i saying.. oh yea what i got out of writing this is an impression of a mind repeating these thoughts of loss over and over again because it cant find any closure.. but is reassured by the feeling of a caring presence, but left only to play it over again.. such a painful loss this must be |
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