Teen Poetry #5 |
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Masakist |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali ![]() |
I've been told pain is bad. Yet I always seem to find it. Only, its in a way like I've been Searching. Looking. Hoping. To be hit. Yelled at. Hated. Will you, like everyone else, Hate me also? Please do. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This poem is so me... you just hit it right on the spot. Pain can be very good for you as long as you don't let it control you. Thanks so much for posting this... I really, really enjoyed reading it. ![]() The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really enjoyed the read, I found it a little different from what I normally read, thanx for sharing and keep on writing and replying ![]() Andrew Join the Imperial Space and Navy and become a Ti(tus) fighter. ;) |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Just one critique... I believe it's "Masochist" I liked this poem. I think it has a lot of potential... I also think you could expand on the idea. Masochism is a very hard thing to deal with. I wish you luck... Hang in there. --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hmm...not really shur what to say but that i understand it on a level that i cant even put into words... ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oopsie ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (01-04-2002 11:49 AM).] |
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