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Letters to my soul
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Letters to my soul |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Letters to my soul; addressed to a sinner's body delivered to a loon's mind recieved by the depressed dated to my heart yet destroyed by my pain signed as the statistic read by the doctor diagnosed to the cage progonosis delivered to my soul treatment bound to my crying eyes there is no hope packaged full of powder read aloud to the mourning flock sealed with death's kiss postmarked december 29th, 2001 looked upon my lover's eyes understood to be the final episode frowned upon by my lover's tears sincerly, 18.3% dated,december 30th,2001 the phone rang december 30th,2001 3pm no answer, recieved by december 29th, 2001 return address to the ghost delieverd by the crazy head doctor recieved by my lover's tears there is no more while everything still exists the letters to the soul have vanished along with the body of the 18.3% reminded of my lover's tears addressed to a sinner's body delievered to my dying wish. Regina some things in life are not meant to be, while others are meant to be cherished |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This was a very, very interesting poem. I like the way you wrote it very much. Thank you for posting it.  The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Ina! This was incredible! How long did it take for you to come up with it? I found it extremely creative. Just...wow. Thank you for sharing this! ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
i really really like the whole idea of "letters to my soul" this was an excellent write, keep it up. les |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
a fresh and creative style. Me like. 'Nuff said i think "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Ina... what can I say, such a wonderful peice that there aren't really words to describe it!!! SPECTACULAR!!! Melster!!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
The title reminds me of a chicken soup book. lol... I liked how interesting this was good job  Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ina Ina Ina  When will we get the chance to talk again? You're never on anymore  là où est mon amour? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a really interesting piece. Instead of it making me go "WOW" I'm sitting here, thinking about what you've gone through. It's also brought a lot of others to head but that was the first thing. It's really creative what you've done and the imagery is quite outstanding. It takes the whole concept of letter poetry and changes all the regular 'rules' around. Thanks for sharing it. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wow... this is certainly an interesting one! But kinda sad, isn't it? Everything seems to be pointing towards a dead-end, a 'terminal disease'...  Hope you're feeling much better now..._,,,^.^,,,_ |
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