Teen Poetry #5 |
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Love |
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Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME ![]() |
Love They say I'm to young, to know what love is. Maybe there right . Maybe I don't know. But what I do know is, I'v never felt this way before. When I'm with him, all my worries go away, and I'm the happiest person ever. When I'm not with him, I feel lost and helpless. I become miserable, all I can do is think of him. I cry just thinking, about losing him. I can't imagine, life without him. Now I dont know, if this is love or not, but if it's not, the i guess they were right, I dont know. |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
This poem is lovely! I'm glad you've found someone so special! Even if it's not true love, take care of him and you'll have some good times! If it's not love then someday you'll find it! Keep up the good work! ![]() ![]() |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hmm...well it sounds like love to me!! but then again im not expert ![]() ![]() yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
it may not be love, but it's good times. so take em while they last. it's a great write. forget the naysayers. damn the man. i am that merry wanderer of the night |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
From reading this poem I can tell that it's love. Glad that you've found someone to share that love with. Nice poem! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Even though I've been hurt in love, but I still hold pretty idealistic views of love... And I think what you have there is love. ![]() In love, we accept each other for who we are (coz nobody is perfect), and we learn to trust. And you don't have to see eye to eye always, but he/she must be able to understand your perspective. To me, that's love... ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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