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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2002-01-09 03:02 PM



                 Love

They say I'm to young,
to know what love is.
Maybe there right .
Maybe I don't know.
But what I do know is,
I'v never felt this way before.

When I'm with him,
all my worries go away,
and I'm the happiest person ever.

When I'm not with him,
I feel lost and helpless.
I become miserable,
all I can do is think of him.

I cry just thinking,
about losing him.
I can't imagine,
life without him.

Now I dont know,
if this is love or not,
but if it's not,
the i guess they were right,
I dont know.

© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
gymnast
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1 posted 2002-01-09 04:54 PM


This poem is lovely!  I'm glad you've found someone so special!  Even if it's not true love, take care of him and you'll have some good times!  If it's not love then someday you'll find it!  Keep up the good work!
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2 posted 2002-01-09 06:30 PM


Hmm...well it sounds like love to me!! but then again im not expert Im so glad you have someone in your life that makes you feel so wonderful hun Thanks for sharing this poem!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Ethan Halo
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3 posted 2002-01-10 03:20 PM


it may not be love, but it's good times. so take em while they last.
it's a great write. forget the naysayers.
damn the man.

i am that merry wanderer of the night

Domzi
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4 posted 2002-01-12 11:46 AM


From reading this poem I can tell
that it's love. Glad that you've
found someone to share that love
with. Nice poem!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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5 posted 2002-01-12 12:23 PM


Even though I've been hurt in love, but I still hold pretty idealistic views of love... And I think what you have there is love.

In love, we accept each other for who we are (coz nobody is perfect), and we learn to trust. And you don't have to see eye to eye always, but he/she must be able to understand your perspective. To me, that's love...

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Florence

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