Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Am A Dreamer |
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crazymin83 Junior Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 49Mass |
I am a dreamer I am a dreamer of no pain I am a dreamer of someone excepting me as me, and not who they want me to be I am a dreamer of tomorrow to see what to except in life I am a dreamer of love, pain, and friendship Just look past my wheelchair Just look past my disability Just look in my heart to see me Just look at my smile that will tell you a lot about me I am a dreamer of no more judging in the world Or how pretty everyone has to look I am a dreamer of friendship I am a dreamer of seeing my dad one-day To wake up in the morning to have everything back to normal Just come see my world Just come see threw my eyes Just come see what I see Just be me for one day and it will be hard I am a dreamer of no pain I am a dreamer of someone excepting me as me, and not who they want me to be I am a dreamer of tomorrow to see what to except in life I am a dreamer of love, pain, and friendship Minna December 21, 2001 "If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D" |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
I like this format, and the repetition. Good idea for a write, and good job on it. ![]() Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I dream of similar things, and I sincerely hope that both of our dreams come true!! ![]() ![]() *~Fighting for your love~* |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I enjoyed your use of this format...great poem ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Min, it is good to have dreams because ultimately, they do come true. Although some of them make take a while to happen, they do eventually. The majority of this was pretty positive and that itself is commendable. You should be happy with this piece. You're coming across as a wonderful writer with so much to give to the world. I hope things work out for you. Please remember to reply to others work also. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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crazymin83 Junior Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 49Mass |
I'm sorry for not repling, my computer that I use broke. So please don't be mad at me. My younger sister loved this poem she said where'd you come up with it? I said in my head. Bye Merry X-Mas & Happy New Year ![]() "If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D" |
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