Teen Poetry #5 |
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A woman now (please read comments are soo needed) :) It's a happy poem..I think:Þ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA ![]() |
Yesterday was my bday..but my age is undisclosed =Þ I'll give you a hint it's more than you think..lol..but you can email me with your guesses if you like j/k..don't be surprised it really isn't going to rhyme... Today I am a woman Wise in so many little ways A naive soul A beatiful heart And dreams full of memories I remember waking up Rushing out that door to go to school Now I rush out that door For another paycheck And to make this month's rent Another birthday Another year, that I'm forever thankful To have friends and family near It's not about the presents Not about the cake It's about the sacrifices And the choices I have to make And not about what other people think Life is too short To second guess And always try to perfect For another human being Who is trying to take control And it wasn't when I blew out those candles Or when the clock struck 3:45 in the morning When I became a woman It's when I started to let go of the the negativity And restraints upon my heart And finally realized life isn't so bad Is when I truly became a woman... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (12-21-2001 03:23 PM).] |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Oh wow this is nice, i really enjoyed this piece alot, i dunno your age though but im assuming old enuff to be on your own...lol Nice piece! ....Handle with care... |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
21? I don't know, that's just my fav # and age ![]() About the poem, lvoed it! It was more mature and deep then most I see here, and it was very, very clearly written. I loved it! Definetly a library. ![]() Sincerely, Titus |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
and about the age...18 would still be in college...hmm. um, letme think...*thinks* 50! just kidding? ![]() The poem itself as titled was VERY mature and deep as ti-said. i agree on that...it had lot of experiences and things you learned written out quite nicely. Hey...#25437 What! You in there? Yea, im in here. ok [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (12-22-2001 02:40 AM).] |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I liked this one alot...I found that I could relate to it. It was very well writtend... now for your age...hmmm I am going to guess 22 or 23? Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
DEC 21? You and I share a birthday ![]() Great work here. Lemme guess...hmmm...23? Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I'm so glad to read motivational pieces like this one!! It was very well-written and it seems like you've recognized some very important things in life. Happy Birthday, and congrats on "becoming a woman"!! As for the age my guess is 23.. ![]() ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
I really liked this its so true you can never grow if you're holding on to the past and negativity The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
68!!! ![]() Nice write here. I liked what it represented. Realising you're your own individual and embracing the idea of being mature instead of wallowing in the emptiness of it is a wonderful experience. ![]() Thanks for sharing. Please remember to reply to others work also. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Great poem, rhyming dosen't matter that much in this one. It flowed fine despite that. The negative things of the past can hinder your growth, so I'm glad you released it all; life really isn't that bad. But my typing skills are. ::sigh:: Don't Drink and Park! |
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