Teen Poetry #5 |
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I miss what we had |
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krystlebabe19 Junior Member
since 2001-11-09
Posts 27 |
I miss talking to you all, night long on the phone I miss hearing your voice, when im all alone I miss listening to you telling me all your life stories I miss spending time with you in the night or even morning I miss reading your emails and getting your cards I miss being with you I never thought it would be so hard By~*Krystle*~ |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
break ups are tough and i hope you beging to get over this. give it time babe. good things come to those who wait :-) ab |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You dont know what you have until its gone... ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Honey, I feel your pain. I know exactly (well, not EXACTLY, since I'm not you, but you know what I mean) what you're going through. It hurts right now, but you WILL get through it. ![]() ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"I miss being with you I never thought it would be so hard" missing someone is one of the hardest fellings to deal with esp if you love them. i liked the poem. =) |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Missing or losing someone is one of the harest things to go through so I hope you can get through it soon.THis is a great piece I love it and keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Hmmm, this was a great poem. I can relate to what you are talking about. This was well written, and i think you portrayed how you felt very well, straight forward. Excellent write, To the library does it go!! Relationships may come and go, but do not isolate yourself because of one bad, for if you do- you might just lose your chance at the special one that has been planned for you. If you need to talk to someone, you can e-mail me: [email protected] LaterZ, -Dreys |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
I loved this I've always said, you don't know what you got till it's gone :P
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Hey hun, This was really sad. ![]() ![]() ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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krystlebabe19 Junior Member
since 2001-11-09
Posts 27 |
I just wanted to say thank you for all the people who replied to my poem , it really helped alot knowning im not the only one who has theses feelings. Well thanxs again ! ![]() ~Krystle |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Blah...Break ups bite...Ecspecially when you are as close to the person as you seem to have been (Thus potrayed ot have been in your poetry at least...) Nice write. "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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Sherri New Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 5 |
Wonderfully well written. I recently had a b/f more to tennessee and i live in illinois, and its been really hard with out him here so i understand what you are saying. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I'm sorry for you. I won't say you learn from it anymore because losing someone is bloody hard. I hope you'll be alright. ![]() Take care and thanks for posting. Please remember to reply to others work also. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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