Teen Poetry #5 |
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Love hurts |
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sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
All my life i've been told that love is a wonderful thing Somehow i dont agree. I know for sure that love is out to hurt you. They say they love you but the truth shows in the end. HE'll say he loves you then someday he'll tell you it's not true. I know i love him and i know he loves me But i'm not sure how long this will last. Will he love me forever or will love hurt again......... I know this is sorta short but it's what i was thinking at the time. I'm not sure why though cause it really isn't how i feel. Don't be sad because it's over smile because it happened! |
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes, love can hurt. Have you been through this before? Maybe that's why you were writing it. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
Yea i have been through it with my step dad and my mom's ex boyfriend. that's prolly why i wrote it. Thanx for reading and replying~Cassi Don't be sad because it's over smile because it happened! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's not Love that hurts you Love is truly a beautiful thing it's the lack of it that gives you hurt thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
At times in my life i completely agree with your poem and at others i dont...i guess it really depends on where you are at that moment in your life. Giving your heart to someone is actually ALLOWING them to hurt you because your in a vulnerable state but yet you cant truely love another without giving up your heart to them..so go figure huh?? You present an interesting thought in this poem...great poem i really liked it! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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