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Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
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0 posted 2001-12-16 09:55 PM


For Craig


Surrounded by darkness,
Completely alone with the company of stars,
I could hear not the sound of the water under us-
Not the sound of the wind rushing around us-
Only the sound of your breath, your words,
Encased in a bubble,
A euphoric world of our own;
Reaching from your arms to mine,
Enclosing us in a peaceful haven
Where reality ceased to exist,
The world was still and we were spinning
Oblivious to everything but you and I,
The real world stopped frozen in time,
My cold body warmed by the heat inside you,
The impact of your actions, your passion
Eclipsed all possible outside interferences;
That place, that bubble was solely ours
Take me to that world with you

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1 posted 2001-12-18 01:24 PM


very beautifully said Bela
I loved each owrh
Hoping the best for you
happy holidays

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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2 posted 2001-12-21 11:07 AM


là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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3 posted 2001-12-21 02:03 PM


BEAUTIFUL POEM !!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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