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Teen Poetry #5

i'm lost

gloryfizz123
New Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 5
south of boston...MASS

0 posted 2001-12-20 03:11 PM

i hate how we have nothing,
we're not even friends,
i thought we'd be together until the very end.
but i was just hopeing,
i was just being dumb,
i now know for sure...that i am not the one.

but somehow the tingles,
are still moving strong.
the feelings are still there too,
although they feel wrong.

i am overwhelmed with dreams,
i don't know what to do.
there is only one cure,
and that cure is you.

the ambivalence is taking over
which feeling do i choose?
i am just so lost,
so lost without you.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2001-12-20 03:43 PM

Great poem!
Do I ever know how you feel!
Well, my brain hurts, so, I'll just wait for the next one.....

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2001-12-20 06:36 PM

Love it! Great poem.

I hope you find your way...

Titus

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-12-21 02:07 AM

I know exactly how you feel and I know how much it sucks.I hope everything gets better for you soon.But I really loved this poem and keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-12-21 02:01 PM

Im sorry hun ::hugs:: its so hard to be friends with your ex-lover..maybe give it some time and then you'll be able to be friends...im sorry that he's lost as of now..but i hope you gain what you want from him in the end..

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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