Teen Poetry #5 |
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Lil_Angel123 Junior Member
since 2001-12-16
Posts 13 |
I have too many {edit}problems No one can see them i cover them up just like i cover up the sadness just like a cover up my pimples its there only one person knows its there and that is me no one knows the real me i never show it i dont want anyone to feel bad for me i know that i have too many {edit}problems that no one can solve and i know that they are there and i know that its hurting me and i know theres nothing i can do you dont have to tell me All i do it cover them up it works until one day i explode and tell the wrong person and then word will get out that i have... too many {edit}problems! ~Amanda~ [This message has been edited by Alyssa (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
I am the exact same way...if ya need anything, im here for ya! anywho, excellent piece... -Joe |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Hey!!!!! Welcome to Passions!!! ![]() ![]() Glad to have you here. Check your email!!! [This post has been created by Alyssa, be joyous she has graced you with her pressence!!!] |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I know exactly what you are talking about I cover up everything and sometimes I expload.But I don't tell someone when I expload I go off on people it's not a good thing.I wish I could tell you how to no keep everything inside but if I knew how to do that my life would be so much easier and more happy.SO if you ever need someone to talk to feel free to e-mail me because I'm exactly the same as you are.Oh and I love this poem it's one of my favorites keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know how your feelin too...i use to cover up all my problems and let them eat me away on the inside but i grew to express myself so that way i wouldnt let them over-take me and i think its an important thing to learn...but i have to admit i still sometimes fall subject to letting them over power me and then hiding them away so i dont have to deal with them..i guess everyone does it..nicely written poem...well done ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You at least need to show your true self Some problems we can handle on our own But some we do need help This is the time we have to show up as ourselves No hiding behind any wall, or mask thanks for the read là où est mon amour? |
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