Teen Poetry #5 |
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crazymin83 Junior Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 49Mass |
only we could have a dad in our family To keep things strait with everything Sometimes I want cancer to disappear and never come back It’s not fair losing a family member like that They mean the world to everyone Then one-day cancer hits them And they start to get weaker They can’t smile as much They can’t laugh as much They can only cry That’s how my dad died He was awesome but now he’s in heaven with angels If only I could have him back Cause I really miss him Everyone looked up to him His smile that made me happy His spirit that made me a better person Everyday I think of him Thinking will he back today Or tomorrow Then I see he’s never coming back God took him on December 23, 1999 My dad no longer smiled He no longer had that laugh like before I don’t understand why he died Maybe I do But it hurts to see pictures of him and I A prefect friendship Has ended in a horrible ending Tears come running down my eyes As I look at the Christmas tree He always made every one feel loved But I must move on in life Show him how strong I’ve gotten No one will ever replace my dad Life brings tears, smiles, and memories. The tears dry, The smiles fade, The memories will stay forever. Minna December 16, 2001 |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh min, this is so sad yet incredibly touching. You always write such lovely pieces about your father that I wonder what it would have been like to meet him. He sounds like a truly wonderful person. Take care and thanks for sharing. Your poems always hit a soft spot. ![]() ~AF~ "I don't think we should have to face all of our fears in one life." - Kevin, Seachange |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This is one of the saddest but most touching poems I have every read .I wish I could say I know what your going through but I can't so all I can say is that I'm so sorry and if you ever need anyone to talk to I'm here.You have such a special talent for writting and this a truely beautiful piece. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna --- don't wish bad things to happen to yourself. You've been strong all this time and I believe your dad has been proud of that. Don't give up now, stay strong and fight till the end. That is what makes you special.....so, keep that head up okies ![]() là où est mon amour? |
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