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keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

0 posted 2001-12-15 01:56 AM

I guess I don’t know you anymore
You’re not the same person I knew before
I thought I knew everything about you
Come to find out most of it’s untrue
Hate to call you two faced
But my trust was misplaced
And the effort I’ve spent has gone to waste
In the beginning things went great
I fell in love with you on our first date
Soul mates, that’s us, or so I felt
The perfect hand I was dealt
Relationship failed and that was fine
I’m not in your heart but you’ll be in mine
You were confused but I know how I feel
My heart’s been abused, that’s how I know it’s real
You meant too much, I wasn’t willing to lose it
Friendship is fine if I cannot choose it
Things went great, for awhile
When I’m with you can’t do nothing but smile
You found a new guy, a new relationship
That’s when I noticed ours began to slip
You didn’t call much
And I saw you even less
The more you disappear
The more that I stress
I blamed him, never you
He wasn’t the problem, it was us two
I lost control, let my heart grow cold
The more lies I was fed, the more it grew cold
Just quit caring, just quit calling
Dropped the emotional baggage I’d been hauling
If you ain’t gonna try, neither am I
Done feeling pain, ain’t worth it to cry
The say friends come and go
I guess I finally know
When we both don’t try
We’ll be left with nothing to show

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-12-15 02:08 AM

I know how this feels, and I'm sorry. You wrote your emotions very clear....(((hugs))) I hope you are ok

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-12-16 03:08 AM

Ah Jon, I feel for you man. I'm sorry to hear that a friendship you thought quite highly of disintergrated in your hands. At least you can be left with a memory that you were great friends with this person once upon a time. It mightn't be much but at least it's something.

Good luck with everything and thanks for the read.

~AF~

"I don't think we should have to face all of our fears in one life." - Kevin, <i>Seachange</i>

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2001-12-17 04:22 AM

~Jon~

Hey there buddy!!! How ya doing?? Great poem...I know where you are coming from. I just lost the person I thought would be there for me forever. My boyfriend and I broke up about 3 weeks ago. I spent 2 years with someone who i trusted with anything and evrything. 2 years to grow close and then a conversation to get rid of everything we ever had.

Your poem sums everything up so clearly for me. And Im sorry you are feeling like this. But keep your head up buddy!!!

Jon if you ever want to talk you should have my email address. Theres so much I have to say but i will email you.

"Secret admirers make us believe things about ourseles that we had always hoped were true"

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

4 posted 2001-12-22 09:39 AM

eep I think we all know how this feels like sometime in our life.. sucks, yesh it does! you wrote this wonderfully jon, I can just feel your emotions hangin there. *big ol' hugs to you* i hope everything looks up for you. great job on this poem and keep em coming.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

5 posted 2001-12-22 07:41 PM

I liked this alot. Although it was sad, you were right in the point you seemed to be getting across. All relationships (whether it be friendship or more) require effort from both people. You just can't do it alone, despite the number of times I know I've tried to. Anyways, you wrote this well. Good luck.

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-12-23 12:57 PM

I hate when you think you know someone and it turns out that you dont at all..its such a dissapointment...im sorry this happened hun..nicely written poem though and i think you expressed yourself nicely

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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