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Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2001-12-23 04:27 AM

You say you listen    so why don’t you hear?
You say you’ve been there      so why can’t you see?
You say you care so much    yet you’re never near,
You say you understand     but you don’t know me.
You stopped caring    because you hate what I became,
And I gave up    because you refuse to accept.
Now I’m your problem    and you’re my bane,
And all I do    is reminisce and regret.
I regret being born
I regret every single day
I regret being torn
I regret each word I say
I hate being here
Disgusted to be
I hate this fear
Because you made me regret being me.
* i wrote this after me and my parents got in a pretty ruf argument...so sorry if the meter/rhythm are off a little...i changed the little stuf but i didn't want to change too much

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
-Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2001-12-23 06:02 AM

i'd like to think that i'm reading between the lines correctly...
i feel this a great deal. only existing to be blamed for things or be someone's punching bag or whatever. and you can only hear so much of this kinda stuff before you start to believe it.

well it ain't true, expecially if the passion behind your writing is anything to go by.your spirit isn't broken yet...tuck it away, nuture it, and don't let anyone tell you what you're worth.
you figure it out.
good writing. charged with feeling.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2001-12-23 06:15 AM

you read between the lines right....thanx for the comment...

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
-Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-12-23 01:48 PM

i completely understand how your feeling...but please dont think that way..::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-12-23 03:12 PM

I liked this poem alot, and I definitely felt like I could relate to what you were saying. I wrote a poem similar to this one called "Mistake", that I might just post after reading yours. Anyways, I hope that you can talk to your parents and straighten things out with them. And, if not, don't let them dictate how you feel. Hang in there...

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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