Teen Poetry #5 |
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crazy cracker nut -senryu- |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Bouncing squares scene… Helpless screams in blackness, Red stain. Everywhere [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 09-29-2001).] |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Red stain? EVERYWHERE? GAH!!! Is it blood??? How gory...oO; hehe. Is this your first senryu albish? Cuz I haven't seen any before till today, and they're pretty good. Go write more. MORE! Or suffer my wrath...*background: what wrath?* What's with the "." ? lol, nutcase. ![]() ~Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmmmm interesting!! ![]() Coolness Alberta, keep it up. Jenn "In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*hides before he throws large objects at her* Albertia!! Sunshine!! You're going to kill me. *gulps* I'm still figuring what it's about that's why I haven't posted it! Don't hate me....please? ![]() Tell you what, I'll dedicate an entire piece to your brilliance IF you decide to be nice and not kill me. ![]() Take care buddy. ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
HMmmmm...Hi Alby! ![]() Nice write...Whats a Senryu? HeHeHe TEACH ME! I'm willing to learn! LOL Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
WOW! creepy! I like! |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hehehehehehe me like ![]() |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ok, I'm gonna need some explanation here I know you love to write gruesome poems but I still don't get it là où est mon amour? |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol@ all the lil' nicknames albert has from the wierdOs. yesh we all know alberts a wierdO too. neways....I Liked It! Not a big fan of this style but this one was a wee bit different..hmm maybe the gruesome part? ya think?! yesh i think so. I agree with Leah, do some more senryus! Nice job Albert. The title is what made me curious. *loved the title* tiff ![]() “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” I know Im not perfect but I can smile & I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (12-22-2001 09:34 AM).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
A piece from the heart, Filled with such mortal sadness Deserves a small bump. ![]() If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hmmmmmm yes alby is a nerdy weirdo but ya gotta love em! creepy yet intresting love it alby! robin repeat after me and rhonda : TITUS RULES THE EARTH!! ( i saw your sig rhon! lol) |
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