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sweetlilangel
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0 posted 2001-12-07 06:25 AM


Ice cold tears
I’m tired of these icy tears
and lengthy sleepless nights.
I can’t remember when I last ate and kept it down
I want all these worries and fears to simply disappear
I did it again I allowed myself
to love a mistake I made once before.
Back then I didn’t know
I never should have loved you
I should have avoided you instead.
Your with her and now I’m dead
dead to you that is
you shouldn’t care though cause you’ve got a new “love’
so I’m letting go!

© Copyright 2001 Cassi - All Rights Reserved
Spine Grinder
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1 posted 2001-12-07 06:41 AM


awe cassi! dont say that, just remember, its not over until the doughgurl singS! lol...
lylas

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-12-07 12:42 PM


Weren't you happy in another poem?  

Well I hope things work out for you here.

~AF~

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner.



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3 posted 2001-12-12 05:39 PM


It's a good thing to let things out and poetry is one medium that enablers us to do so.  It's good you are taking advantage of this.  I do hope you feel better soon for you seem so sad. *hugs*

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


prov1717
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4 posted 2001-12-26 08:49 PM


i hope that things work out for you, don't dwell on it, stuff works out eventually. keep your head up ya know.  i liked the poem. dark. but good and i think that a lot of people will probably feel you on this one. good job.
leslie

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2001-12-26 10:02 PM


Oyy happy ----> Sad just like that!!! Aww hun...im sorry ::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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6 posted 2001-12-26 11:07 PM


*hugs* I'm sorry things are tough for you right now.  Just hold your head high... the sky is much more beautiful to look at than your shoes.     Take care.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

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