Teen Poetry #5 |
Slipping away |
sweetlilangel Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 26 |
Slipping away I feel things changing as time goes on we are not the same we’re not like one. We used to know everything about each other now there is this big void between you and me. I think the void has a name but I will not tell who. I know that you will fill it soon. Why do we have to slip away??? I wrote this not to long ago when i thought that a friend of mine was trying to take my boyfriend now i know she isn't and i still love her to death~Cassi |
||
© Copyright 2001 Cassi - All Rights Reserved | |||
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks gurl! this wuz a awesum write, and u know how much i care! byes ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
||
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This reads more as prose to me but it's good to see the two of you are such good mates. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
||
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Even though you're both real friends, you still have to go thruy trying times as others do. Being able to go thru this only makes you better friends. Hope you solve your differences. Thanks for sharing. là où est mon amour? |
||
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Nice write I'm glad everything worked out for you. Lauren |
||
HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I liked this poem, sounds like what my girlfriend thought was happening a whie ago. It is different, I grant it that, but it is still good. Anything written with emotion is great. Don't Drink and Park! Accidents may cause People! [This message has been edited by HopelessRomanticGuy (edited 12-12-2001).] |
||
prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
i'm happy you two were able to maintain your friendship good poem. peace lesie |
||
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im happy that this had a happy ending to it i love happy endings!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
||
Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"friend" is key. That one word can make a world of difference when it comes to relationships. Good luck.. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |