Teen Poetry #5 |
![]() ![]() |
Ex-girlfriends, Friends, US |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
She’s been calling you again She says she still loves you But you’re with me, now She called when I was there But he hung up the phone on her He doesn’t like her much He thinks she wants you back And she’s trying to get me out You say that ain’t gonna work You tell me you love me You say you wanna be with me He says I’m the best girl you’ve had That I’m good for you You wanna spend tyme with me You wanna be with me My Sis thinks you’re “the one” And she’s usually right You wanna hold me in your arms You wanna lie next to me in sleep I want to be with you I love you! *sigh* nobody cares [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 06-24-2001).] |
||
© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved | |||
Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is pretty good, Tamma. You're lucky you found this person. Cherish what you two have together. You never know what might happen... Best of luck. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." –James T |
||
Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Tamma, i really enjoyed the read. Andrew ![]() |
||
Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ditto to what these kids already said... best of luck to you, Tamma. We're all pulling for you. ![]() |
||
FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Some words of wisdom: (yes I am fond of quotes) "The love we give away is the only one we keep." -Elbert Hubbard Keep your love and cherish it and he will remain with you for a long time. *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
||
chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Nice poem. Very sweet. ![]() You two are very lucky to have each other. -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
||
obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
how positively sweet! Wonderful expression. Great poem! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
||
Acies![]()
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful way of showing your deepest feelings and emotions. really sweet. thanks for the read and keep it up hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
||
SEA![]() ![]()
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope she leves him alone..... ![]() |
||
Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh hooray, you're happy! Yay! Rhonda ![]() "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
||
katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is sweet! you're so lucky you've got him. katie fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you |
||
fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
ehh..i'm kinda bitter about luv now so i can't say my reply will be the best. this is pretty kool tho. not all love sucks...lol sorry. later -fear- |
||
stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
that is really cute!! I hope everything works out for ya!! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
||
Dopey Dope![]()
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Lovely poem Tamma.....I enjoyed this one. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
||
cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
Cute Poem-Wish i had a boyfriend ![]() |
||
cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
Cute Poem-Wish i had a boyfriend ![]() |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |