Its been a Long Time - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

luvnkris
Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-21 01:18 AM

*Well i havn't been on here for a while! But i just thought i'd share this poem with you...*

It's Been a Long Time

Who would have thought we'd be together still
After all of this time our 'thing' is very real
Life has thrown a lot of troubles our way
And I'd be niave to say they all went away
Its been a rocky road that we travelled you and me
I still wake up each day thankful that mine you'll be
I can't believe how much crap has try to pull us apart
And for a while we were letting it take over our hearts
But now we are back
And our hearts are on track
We made it through some bad times
And it made us stronger coz your still mine
So thankyou Kristian for being there,
At least I know forever you'll care

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

1 posted 2001-11-21 01:05 PM

luvnkris,

What a beautiful tribute to the one you love. Welcome back to Pip.

Dawn

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

2 posted 2001-11-21 08:13 PM

LOL love the critique!
anyways
WELCOME BACK!

i love this piece btw!

I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM"

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

3 posted 2001-11-21 08:18 PM

Really sweet poem. There are a few typos that I'm sure you're aware of, lol, not trying to be picky. But I like the way you did this, I thought it was a nice tribute.

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-11-26 09:36 AM

Nice to see you post again
I'm glad to see everything is going great for you
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-12-26 04:09 AM

luvnkris-
Very sweet tribute...nicely done.
Good to see you here.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-12-26 09:02 AM

AWWWW cutesy.
This is sweet.
Welcome back

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-12-26 10:23 AM

Welcome back!! Very cute poem

PLease keep postin!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-12-26 01:31 PM

Welcome back, Kris! Wow, it's been a long time since I've seen you here. I'm glad that you and your guy are still together. I'm happy for you. Everyone deserves to have that special someone.
Good luck with the relationship. I hope things continue to go well for a long time.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

prov1717
Member

since 2001-12-26

Posts 74
NE

9 posted 2001-12-26 05:19 PM

this is a really sweet poem, i'm glad that you have something to write a poem like this for.....best of luck

leslie

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.