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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC 
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Time knows no more than I, Constant and mute to changes. It is not time that changes the mind But, sweet words, quick thoughts and pains. A second and an eternity have equal share If, in that time, I realize you care. Do not use time to push me away And dismiss my heartfelt plea. I see the doubts that cast and stay Because of prematurity. Take my trembling hand and quivering lip And let my tears reveal what you can't believe, Because, your heart has broken bit by bit And even yet.. continues to bleed. Look into my eyes and listen, as I say with nervous breath, that I open my heart to you, with a prayer above, And expose what insecurity I have left To tell you... you are really loved. ______________ this was done off my head~!!!!!! so please be careful with it *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
Im really feelin this poem been there times before myself good work The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
man.... this was particularly good.. yes... yes it was very very good. VERY VERY good |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
It was very good. LOL Dawn |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I liked the idea that you were talking about...i took it that overall use your time wisely not to hurt people but to take advantage of the good things..im not shur if im right but..i enjoyed this a lot! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"A second and an eternity have equal share If, in that time, I realize you care." Hey deary!  As always, Kudos to you! You are a awesome writer....I miss you in Teenchat though..  Hit me up on ICQ...I need the DL on whats going on in your lil world..."I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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