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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-11-14 03:24 PM

I have this little box
Filled with memories of you.
Sometimes I open it
And remember the times we shared.
It makes me feel whole, just as much as empty,
Happy, just as much as sad,
And, loved just as much as lonely.

As I pick up the scattered memories,
I feel as though I am picking up
Pieces of my heart.
I smell them, feel them,
Touch them, and remember them.

When I put them together,
I feel as though as I am constructing a mold of my heart,
Replacing each piece of the frame.
Every time I open the box,
The frame gets stronger and less fragile.

It makes me smile to know that
At one time I was loved and that I loved.
Many pieces remind me of the pain you gave me,
But with sorrow and grief... comes power and triumph
And I feel as though I have won.

You may have broke my heart
But you taught me something;
If you love someone, really really love them,
Love will give you the strength to let them go.

____________________________
im not going threw this was writing this for a friend... trying to help get over a loved on that left her... and left her hurting .. so i was trying to tell her if she loved him, she should let him go .. even if it means NOT being with her

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2001-11-14 04:45 PM

I understand about the lil box, I sort of have one myself......it's got 4 things in it, a letter, 2 pictures, and a birthday party invitation.......great poem....

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-11-15 04:14 AM

awwwwwww...this is soooooooo sad!...but i have to tell you- you wrote it VERY well! i mean i thought you were going through the sad process going through broken pieces of your heart...

...awesome write A. i enjoyed this one LOADS!

BUM!

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2001-11-15 11:45 AM

The imagery in here was really good. You expressed some wonderful feelings and you described them really well. I definitely liked this.

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~
AIM sn: nikkigrl2004

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2001-11-15 01:24 PM

I really enjoyed this one. Very sad, but it's definately a message I need to hear right now. Thanks
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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