Teen Poetry #5 |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada ![]() |
Sadness as I know is hard the love as I know it is painful Where are the warm embraces The hugs on rainy days Please don't leave me all alone The friendships have vanished the weight is gone the pressure has increased all because I love you New friends and old friends were all in the same boat we all know sadness and anger happiness and bitterness come sweetly come quietly let me hold your hand well make it together hand in hand we wont make it in anger not in pain not with new cuts well only make it holding hands friends forever.... Regina Levu 2001 If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was a really sweetly written poem. I enjoyed it very much. ![]() ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is really very good! I remember coming here a while ago and reading a poem from you, and I loved it, it made me remember your name actually. That was back before I ever joined of course but still I thought you left or something! And now I read this and I was like wow awesome! lol ![]() well I really really love this poem and you have a lot of talent and I hope to see from you again in the future! ok! ![]() Theo |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very sweet and honest. seems like these are hard times however but you have a good person to help ya. good luck. salma |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem Regina! Its good hearing from you again. "The friendships have vanished the weight is gone the pressure has increased all because I love you" Those lines remind me of the exact thing that happened to me not long ago, you expressed it in a beautiful way. Good Job -C.M. |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
Wow! This is really shocking and deep, Regina you have a really easy way to take a villain's heart and make it a beautiful thing Darn great job! |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
come sweetly come quietly let me hold your hand well make it together hand in hand Loved that it was absoloutely great!! thankz for writing this... i really really loved this poem ALLIE |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"Where are the warm embraces The hugs on rainy days Please don't leave me all alone The friendships have vanished" *gives Ina a warm embrace, and a hug on a rainy day* ![]() *gives Ina company* ![]() là où est mon amour? |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
INA, That was BEAUTIFUL!!!!! (I really liked it, anyway....) |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Beautiful poem I really liked it keep up the great work. Lauren |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Now that's what I'm talking about Regina! This one is great. Totally awesome. I really enjoyed it. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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