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I Will Love You
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I Will Love You |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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--for Jeff~~> uli!  ¤I Will Love You¤ When the stars no longer shine and your guiding light disappears, When your world is breaking down and you can no longer stop your tears. I'll be there to hold you until you no longer cry so you can rest your eyes as I sing a lullaby When everything around you crumbles and youre struggling to be found When life knocks you down and you struggle to regain your ground I'll lend my helping hand and give you my view taking yours glady, guiding you through When your heart has been broken and it is beyond repair When your dreams are out of reach and life's just not fair I'll make every wish you have ever made become reality anytime, anyday When you have given up on love and all its entirety When your heart becomes hopelss and youre consumed with anxiety I'll be there to love you until your final breath giving you everything that I have left **You can't always trust the people you want to** [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 11-12-2001).] |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
That was so sweet... What a wonderful poem... Thankz for writing that!! Amazing... Jeff should feel very pleased! ALLIE |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That is really sweet, he should feel speshul now  là où est mon amour? |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Hey girl, This is great, I'm soo glad you posted it!! It's like your offering everything you have 2 this person, and it's sooo sweet!! Great work!! I like it alot!!  ~*Nikki*~~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
awwwwwwww i feel the love . i loved this poem very much not my fav. but i loved it... please keep it up i want to read more~!! *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
aaaaaaaaaww! That's so sweet!!! It's just beautiful, I love it! Keep up the awesome work! ~*~Priscilla~*~ *Nous aimons et nous vivons* |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
ULI This hit my heart hard babe, this was the best thing ive read!! I loved it dearly..thank you so much!!It means a lot to me to know some one i dont know still cares about me..thats special!! Love ya- Jeff |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very touching poem it really hit me hard I loved it girl.Your poems always relate to me and that is cool.But anyway keep up the great work. Lauren |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Yay! Kiley posted! Well done, hun, well done! That was so sweet and... sweet! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
what a sweet poem...everyone need a person like this...*cough*wheresminewheresmine*cough*. lol mr. romantist seems like he liked it VERY much...great job, Kiley. enjoyed it fully...its nice of you to write a piece for someone. =) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i do love this one alot my friend and i hope he liked it when he read it. i can see the little tear running down his face right now in my mindseye. keep up the good work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very nice poem. The format was cool. I really loved the ending. It brought everything together so nicely. Good job Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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