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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-11-08 07:19 PM

Thrashing in your bed,
Can't change what was said.
It's cruelty and the beast,
Devour souls is how I feast.
Dark state of mind,
What was lost you did find.
Fear not what you see,
For that may or may not be me.
Fear what you did not,
Could not and will not see.
The symptons of three,
Pain, pleasure, and rage.
Locked up in a small cage,
Set free to do as I please,
Cross the world thru seven seas.
Searched high and low,
Still I cannot show.
Darkness falls upon me once more,
When can I walk back thru the door?
Dark and tortured soul,
Pondering the day my heart you stole.
Antagonizing we can't be near,
Losing you is all I fear.
Live our lives together in our dark coldness,
Set out together with boldness.
Once more the light shines on me,
Cause you're the one who could see.
Exactly what I needed in my life,
Together we move forward and strife.
In our dark world togehter we stand,
Walking forever hand in hand.

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

1 posted 2001-11-08 07:46 PM

Wow.. I really like this poem keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-11-08 08:04 PM

Nice poem. Very nicely rhimed.

-C.M.

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-11-09 01:47 AM

I like the title of this especially! You did a good thing here with the romance theme, you didn't let it take away from the dark nature of the poem.
Great work!

Theo

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-11-09 10:06 AM

Interesting but wonderfully written! Good job!! Keep em coming!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-11-09 02:21 PM

Very interesting poem. Good job.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

6 posted 2001-11-09 06:24 PM

This was quite different from what I usually read, but I liked it alot!! The title really lured me in. Great work!

~*Nikki*~

~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~

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