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Passes Oblivious
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Passes Oblivious |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Just a quick simple poem.. My heart beats rhythmically My thoughts flow inevitably Music runs through my mind constantly Time passes oblivious My fingers strum air silently My clothes hang loosely Memories intrude evasively Time passes oblivious My heart beats wildly My emotions run turbulently You hold me closely Time passes oblivious My fingers grasp yours firmly My lips find yours instinctively You love me inexplicably Time passes oblivious My dreams persist stubbornly My world proceeds ultimately I can love you eternally -To You, you know who you are- [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 10-26-2001).] |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
wow, omg i love you, for some reason this struck home more than usual, chills and all. i love you baby. "as below so above and beyond i imagine |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You seem to be really head over heals over this guy More power to both of you  thanks for sharing and keep em coming là où est mon amour? |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was really good. I liked the style. Glad you found someone you care about. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
There was lots of love in this one. I liked it! ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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