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Just Called
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I Just Called To Say I love You Just Like I've Always Done, But tonight It seems all different tonight it seems all wrong. Please tell me what is happening, Please Tell me where we went wrong, I need to know our future, I need to know for sure. I love you now as I/ve always done, But I know that this is the end, So before you start to rant and rave, I will walk away and say good-bye! Hey Guys - Just A short one... I miss you all and look forward to meeting more of you as my time here does increase once again!! Love Melz!!  You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Simple and to the point.. nice work. It's good to see you posting again Nicely done here. I hope to see more soon.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Nice Read, Melanie. Simple and straight-forward...I liked it. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very good. Short, simple, and great. Glad to see you back with us!! Jenn "Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Sometimes the shortest poems are the best! Good work! |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was a wodnerful poem. I too look forward to seeing more of your poetry and to getting to know ya! *Amanda* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
simple and to the point ...i enjoyed it.im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I remember when I was a kid.....the first song i could sing.....I was around 1 or so.......some 80's song or something....."I just called to say I love you"....those were the lyrics....yea well just sharing a memory. The poem was out there and well said melz.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This is the first I've read of your poems and so far I love what I see. This was a very strong poem and very emotional! Keep writing!  ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Much appreciated read. Short and easy to grasp. I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Thanks guys your support has always kept me going and writing further... I just have to get some more inspiration and I will be back again! Sorry I am not replying to your poetry, but my time is limited. I read a lot of them though, so don't be thinking I am not reading them and loving them because I am and I love you all and think you all have a great talent!!! Love Melz!!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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