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just_me Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 19 |
The past few weeks Are hard to describe We've come a long way But we're taking it in stride We hang out and talk Get drunk to no end Sleep while doing homework Becoming better friends We still don't know Very much about each other But yet I feel closer Like you are one of my brothers. I can talk to you about anything Or nothing at all I feel like I can trust you To break any of my falls Even though my pennies have to be "heads up" Still all your darn stories Crack me the heck up I have made some remarks And things have now changed But I hope and I pray That things can remain the same [This message has been edited by just_me (edited 11-06-2001).] |
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Greeneyes7 Junior Member
since 2001-11-05
Posts 16Illinois |
Awesome poem. I hope you keep postin. I'm sorry that things changed. Sometimes things that are sad can never be undone but we live and we learn from each thing that is said. I'm sorry. Hope things get better for you and keep posting. Life is what you make it. Live each day as if it was your last. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This is an awesome poem, but I have to ask you to go in and edit your explicit words... I know it doesn't seem like a big deal, but basicly this is a family-oriented site, and if some kid comes in here and asks his/her parent what those words mean (even if they're astrixed out), then the parents aren't going to be too happy, and we don't want to get Ron in trouble, now do we?  Seriously though, could you edit them? And if you can't get into it, email one of the mods and they'll do it for you. Thanks a bunch!!  ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Just me, This is a great poem. Thanks for sharing. I hope things get better for you. Dawn |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
my personal favorite is the 5th stanza..lol anyhoo! each poem i read of yours is getting better and better. and i aslo admire your ability to tell him exactly how you feel. i just wish i had the ability to tell people exactly what i feel and what's on my mind. maybe i need to learn from you (what a scary thought). good write! -adamma *The heart is a house for love* |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This is a great poem I loved it even though you had to edit it.I hope everything gets better for you and keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I love making new friends!!! I enjoyed this poem Good job and keep em comin!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmm, did you develop more than friendly feelings for him? Darn it when that happens.  Good luck with your friendship Nice write Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
ive probably said this like a million times....but im goin through the same thing!!!!! i just lost my best friend. we are slowly talking again, but we dont hang out anymore or anything. i can really relate to this poem, like in the last stanza....me and her have said some things...and we shouldnt have said it. anyways....im puttin this in my aim info...thats how much i like this poem....thanks. Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Ouch. Everything will work out eventually, remember time doesn't heal, do something in that time. Bel |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This one was so sweet!! It's important to have good friends in your life, and I think you expressed that very well! ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello, this is a great poem! I really liked it! I really hope that you are still friends wit this person.. I met my best friend 14 years ago and i'm 15.. we have both said tons of things that make the other feel down or just get really mad.. but we got threw it i hope you can too!!! Thanks for the read Always Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Hey! I really liked this one and can relate to it. Good Job, keep up the good work. - Cody - |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think you did quite well on this one. I enjoyed it very much.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That was a cool read. best wishes to you and this friend of yours là où est mon amour? |
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