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Only Within You
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Only Within You |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
If I am to wait for you, In my sorrow and my loss, Alongside of loneliness, I will grow only within you. I shall not cease this love, While I wait by the side Of my endless boredom, For your beautiful love To, once again, take over me. I await the moment I can again, Hide myself within your heart, And find happiness In your infinite beauty. |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
woah! Deja Vu!, this is not bad danny, especially when I know the story( i think?) Good luck! -C.M. |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I hope you can find love again. Dawn |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
awww this was beautiful. especially liked the last stanza. great job  *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Great job! The format kind of threw me, but once I got it, I saw that it's a great one! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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