Teen Poetry #5 |
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voice in my head |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Isnt it about time You listened to that voice back in your head The one that kept you alive When you where alomost dead When you dont know whether to go left or right It tells you where to go It helps you make the right decisions When you're lost and just don't know Its happy when you're sad Its there when you're away It helps put the right words in your mouth When you don't know what to say When I couldn't ask her He did it right away When I couldnt hold back the tears He said that its okay No one dies a virgin, life screws us all |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
Hey, not bad!at all.Keep it up. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hey I really like this one! It took me a couple read-throughs to understand it, but when I DID get it, I said to myself, 'wow!'. Thanks for sharing... ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What a terrific point!!! I should definately listen to the voice in my head...i tend to try and shut it up but it really does do miracles..interesting topic and wonderful poem! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Lol everyone has always told me to do what the little voices inside my head told me too... hehe if i did i would get into a lot of troublw :P anyway great write ![]() It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Lil_pwheeler, Most of the time that little voice in the back of your head is a very good thing to listen to. Dawn |
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