Teen Poetry #5 |
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One step closer |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL ![]() |
"One step closer" Moving forward the darkness Which enraptures my soul But cannot touch my heart For it is something only you can own And with each passing day I am brought one step closer Drudging through the darkness Letting my heart guide the way For it holds your image Like beacon burning bright Within my heart Bringing me one step closer Held within the darkness tight The golden rays of heaven Though to be beyond my sight But I every time I see you I am brought one step closer Never thinking I would hear The angel’s sweet serenades Yet I am luckier by far As I hear your voice For hours on end I am brought one step closer A light begins to gleam As I open my eyes The darkness begins to fade As your light encompasses me I am taken one step closer With all these steps taken I have come so far That I can see the gates of heaven Gleaming gold before my eyes But it is not heaven that I seek Though heaven is magnificent and divine That which I have searched for Is you And I cannot move on Without your hand in mine So I will stand here and wait Till you stay by my side And we can take one last step closer As we enter heavens gates Hand in hand And Heart in heart It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
i love this one its so sweet ![]() ![]() Don't make me get my flying monkeys :P |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is such a beautiful poem I'm glad I went back and found this beautifully done keep it up là où est mon amour? |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Beautiful poem and I understand exactly what message you are sending.And like you people think I'm a better person then I really am.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
thank you all for your replies It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Well done, well done indeed! Keep it up! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
NICELY DONE!!!! Good job ![]() ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"And I cannot move on Without your hand in mine So I will stand here and wait Till you stay by my side" cause sometimes its true...the world seems to stand still without that ONE person...i relate. =) |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a very beautiful poem. Dawn |
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