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Teen Poetry #5

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Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

0 posted 2001-11-03 05:58 PM

When I decide
Its time to go
My life will leave
And fly away
Just as softly
As a feather

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-11-03 10:23 PM

Hey good write!!! I REALLY this one! The "shortness" or whatever you want to call it suits the format and words very well! Well done!!

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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-11-05 02:01 PM

What gorgeous writing...

Short and sweet and absolutely wonderful!! Great job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-11-05 06:15 PM

simplistic imagery and sybolism...i enjoyed this a LOT...great job.

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