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allie
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since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

0 posted 2001-11-03 08:55 AM

*I'm back, Sorry to have been a way so long, had a bad case of writers block/the blues... This is an angry poem which turned out sickly sweet to start off with anyway... a start......*
I’ve got some friends,
And yeah they’re hot.
They’re nice and funny,
And maybe I’m not.

Whenever I’m with them,
You whistle you cheer,
Then you call me,
Call me honey and dear.

While all the while,
It’s to get to her.
Tangle me up,
A CHANGE MUST OCCUR.

You made me to sick to rhyme,
With your pretty boy eyes,
Your pretty boy smile.

You made me to happy to smile,
With your wonderful jokes,
Your wonderful laugh.

You made me fall for you,
You made me change,
ANOTHER CHANGE MUST OCCUR.

So what am I now?
I’m all types of poems.
I’m all types of wrong.
I’m all types of lost,
I’m no types of strong.
I’m all types of love you.
Your all thoughts of her.
There are too many changes that didn’t occur.

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

1 posted 2001-11-03 12:34 PM

I hate that situation. I know how bad it hurts to be used just so the guy can get to your friend *growls*. I like this, I thought you ended it really well. Good Write. And good to see you around again.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-11-03 10:21 PM

I’m all types of poems.
I’m all types of wrong.
I’m all types of lost,
I’m no types of strong.
I’m all types of love you.
Your all thoughts of her.

I really like this part of it a lot!!! I really really really *dislike* people (read: GUYS) who do stuff like that... It just hurts all the more that they're so smooth. Great write!

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~Love me because I am Rhonda

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-11-05 02:02 PM

I thought this was a very cute poem

Enjoyed it lots!! Nice to see ya posting here again!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-11-05 06:11 PM

straightforward and the sort of twist at the end was nice, Alex.

=)

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